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Thus, in the movie, the Reavers, in a tight mass, block the route to the planet Miranda, even though there would be countless ways, in a very large sky, to just go around them.
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There are only minor problems with this essay. Nothing that would prevent you getting band 7. A minor error would be “death penalty” must have “the” before it. You’ve addressed the task well, your ideas and position are clear and relevant. You have explained and developed your main points. You have used good linking devices. Your paragraphs are good. I can only suggest you now post an essay that you actually wrote in your test – if you can remember both the essay and essay question. You clearly have the ability to get 7 both in technique and language. So, it might be a case of not doing well on the day with the particular essay question given to you.
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Thank you for for encouraging words. I virtually had lost hopes and ran out of ideas. I will try to remember one of the essay questions I faced on test day and then rewrite it and post it. I think one of the major issues that I have had during test is that I fail to produce relevant examples.
Policemen of the World Thesis and Outline
It sounds nice to turn energy into matter, or matter into energy (as in the Transporters), but the velocity of light squared is a really, really big number.
The disruption of the time line has led to his early revival.
This makes replicators, and so unlimited abundance, seem unlikely -- especially given our knowledge of the limited nature of energy and even a sense from Star Trek that energy is limited.
What Abrams does instead involves a major breach of .
Anyway, on the whole, you have the ability to get band 7 but this is only one essay. There might be issues with other kinds of essays that I am not aware of.
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Producing relevant examples is not a problem for your score. You can produce examples if you want but it’s not a requirement of any band score. there are many ways to explain and support an idea – examples are just one way. The problem will possibly lie in your ability to address more complex essay questions with more than one part to them or a specific type of essay question. It is also important to check writing task 1. You might be losing points there.
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Another point to consider is that in this essay you have written a one sided view. That is a simple essay to get right, in terms of technique. Did you try and write a balanced view in your test? Many students make huge mistakes with balanced views and end up with no clear position. That reduces the score a lot. What kind of essay did you write in your test.